My husband and I once wrote a poem together, back when we were much younger. I had just read The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock, and we played around with the idea of adding a refrain to the poem. Ed came up with that part, and it's all I really remember:
Through my window gently gleams
the salty sheen of your moonbeams
Anyway, it was my intent to post a poem about pie. I didn't get around to writing it. My husband came through for me though, and came up with this short poem fairly quickly. He has a knack for words, although he doesn't care for them much (unless he's trying to make someone laugh).
Custard,
cream,
or
fruit-filled.
Lattice-top
Hot or
chilled;
Whichever
pie you undertake,
Whistle
merry as you make,
A slumb’ring
circle sweetly bakes,
‘Till
golden-kissed, it awakes.
One thing’s
for certain:
I need
crust.
--Edward Hull
Your hubby did a great job!
ReplyDeleteGot me licking my lips! Custard cream - yum!
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I like the poem. Fun post! Hope you made it through your day okay yesterday.
ReplyDeleteThanks Joy. We managed all right the other day, and things seem to be getting back to normal.
DeleteI love it! You should put it on a carved/engraved cutting board and hang it in your kitchen.
ReplyDeleteI'm a foodie, so I enjoyed this poem. Cream and custard, yum!
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